Flowing endlessly
until. . .
Reaching the vast oceans
They seem to have different echoes
Of music but their message is the same.
Enjoy us and our beauty
for
We flow eternally
With no beginning or end. . .
A circle of life and beauty
Just like our own lives of pain and sufferings
Which can be replaced with love.
dragonheart1
Author notes
prompt: Oh God ! How do you make rivers flowing towards the oceans...Unknown.
A contest entry
- rivers flowing... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 25, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yes...very true my friend..this voyage is beautifully retold by this poetic verse..well thought and well portrayed poetry is here..well done..
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poem. "Majestic rivers
I added more to my poem entry in your contest as it sounded unfinished. I just thought I'd let you know in case you wanted to reread it....I always appreciate your contests. They are beautiful and maek one thiong of natures beauty around us -
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Thank you..now it is more catching..
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great again
another one of your poems that is so little but says so much to me great job amazing write keep it up keep no going stay true stay sic peace out -
a wonderful take on the promt my friend good luck in the contest
maralisa
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