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Discrase

I may have scars on my face
but that doesn't mean i'm a discrase
people look and people stare
it not nice, it's not fair
I may have scars on my face
but that doesn't mean i'm a discrase
I have people that seem like they care
but when they are around certian peple they act like i'm not there
I may have scars on my face
but that doesn't mean i'm a discrase
It is not my fault that I ended up like this
so tell me why cant people look past it
I may have scars on my face
but that doesn't mean i'm a discrase
I want to have friends
I want to feel the love
I want people around
I want someone to trust

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 11

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    Oooh Nicely done! Great job, this fits with the prompt really really well! The repition really adds to the emotion in this piece. Wonderful job and good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina


    [By the way, "discrace" is actually spelled "disgraced"]