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A Flowing Force

For

 

Love

 

to fall

 

from above

and nurture all below

on a downward course back to

 

the source

it does

flow

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 16

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    What a woinderful poetry you brought flowing from the message of the truth..very well taken intimation in a poetic bliss..well done...


  • Valesha
    January 12

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    awesome

    now this is what i call short,simple, and sweet! i like how you positioned your poem. it seems like as your read the poem the outline of the poem corresponds with it. its really neat!!