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Ice




Ice is life for all mankind
it trickles as it melts
becomes streams of wealth
that nobody felts

You see you turn away
your eyes from the fact
the ice is your life
you must make a pact

God gave you choice
that was not to abuse
nor ignore the creeping silence
on your ultimate world wide cruise

Water is all life
it is a gift to mankind
to see the world of abuse
my God are we all blind
































Author notes

Oh God ! How do you make rivers flowing towards the oceans...Unknown

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  • I like the thought and its shape you brought briniging the immagery very creatively showing the truth of this life..well done...


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 11

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    You did an oustanding job with this my darling, I love the images that your words painted for me to see.

    Joann


  • Patpowers silver member
    January 11

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    Appropriate poem for the dead of witner. Nice message too Karl! Thanks again!