Sanguine stares
from countenance
in every mirror image,
on all hands of clock.
Chipped soul
from salty crystals
running silent rivulets
beyond
masked cries.
Prayers for cleaving mould of life,
secret desire
in long nights.
Author notes
Prompt = Dreams Under The Moon by manips-of-artist2
In a list
A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 27 by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended January 29, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A delighful read
beauty unfolds the words etched
best wishes in this contest
Julie
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Thanks again for your delightful reviews
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Very well-executed with a nice choice of words and vivid imagery. Way to go................!!
Best,
Sophie
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Thank you
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Chipped soul
from salty crystals
running silent rivulets
beyond
masked cries.
so honest dear sister, I liked it
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Thank you
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Makes me wonder exactly what that secret desire is! Very nicely done with the picture. Thanks for entering
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I do like your wording here, the imagery is gorgeous. Very well penned and a great take on the picture. Thank you for entering and best of luck
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this is just beautiful
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Thank you!
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You gave us every opportunity to imagine. And that picture is precious!
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Thank you!
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Wonderful! You certainly dug deep into the picture for this write! Excellent imagery and thought behind this. Love the way you worded this also.
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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Thanks a lot!
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