My journey....
In my mother's arms
I was cuddled, cared and pampered.
Played with my dolls
Ate chocolates and cakes.
Danced with the winds
Floated on my dreams.
Laughed with friends
Cried on tender moments.
Saw love in your eyes
Love to melt in your arms.
I now understand
Why river flows towards the ocean!
Author notes
Like river, my journey has gone down that mountain and I've reached my ocean..... in your deep eyes!
A contest entry
- rivers flowing... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 25, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Yes..one can relate with the image you have brought in the honestly crafted lines..very well done my friend.,..thanks for sharing..
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Not quite sure I get the ending, but
a well written poem all the same. I enjoyed it, thank you


