With the stress we allow us to carry,
We must find a way to let it go.
God talks to us if we listen.
Finally He showed us a way to let things go.
When one watch the water for a while,
You soon will notice it is not sitting.
Actually it is drifting and going by.
Soon one can relax and let things go.
One wrote a note and laid it on the waters.
Later they say the stress was somewhat gone.
Others tried and the told the water in song.
Bu morning their problems were gone.
God is there even though you can't see Him.
Talk to Him, He is your friend.
He is there to ease the burdens of your day.
Let Him float you stress, problems and pain away.
A contest entry
- rivers flowing... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 25, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
With the strss we alow each other
Comments
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The take is very much thoughtful and brings the message very clear..love it..and thanks for sharing it..well done my friend..
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Beautifull poem, extraordinary flow, just as the river that flows into the ocean, the soothing aspect of rivers flowing, was the first thing I wanted to tackle in my own poem " My Friend" but then decided to tackle the story of a drop of water. But even if I did choose the first theme, I couldn't have done it as well as you have. Good luck.
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