Oh God
what was the raw materials you eased to sprout me
and the fluid you infused within me?
I am excited to know
since the moment I am bordered by my teenage
I am learning,
this globe is just good-for-nothing
Instrumental is the exposure
and its well-being impersonated in me
Oh God..
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Image Inspired...Take it where you will by jcat.
900 points, ended January 14, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Your life since a teenager has been full of questions about God...and your write has expressed it...Beautiful penning...I love how your quest for a child like knowledge about God and his world is most precious!
write! 
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Wow......you went deep and penned a most thought provoking piece!!! I am a bit unsure how to comment on it though as I do not want to insult a religion...So what I will say is that I am a huge fan of religous themed (or feeling) poetry as I am Catholic myself.....I found this very beautiful and intriguing!!! Thank you for your entry
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As usual you write so beautifully, and there is always a mystical thought-provoking theme. Well-done!
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Excellent!
Wow, Prab! As short as this is, it packs a wallop and slaps truth right into our faces: "this globe is just good-for-nothing!" And, you are so right. . . at least, until God makes it all new without the flaws of evil.
This piece is well written and has great depth! Personally, I feel it should garner the GOLD!
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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Thank you so much for reading my work..and praising it as well..
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You are a talented man, dear friend! BonnieQ
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Thought provoking
We are all in search for meaning in this world. But, perhaps, it's just a journey, the meaning is to find out it is meaningless and thus stop fighting over it?
So, the experience (exposure) does something to us?
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