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post[ME/A]secret

Thinking of a sunshine that was never, ever mine.
denied an existence, a place in your heart, all i wish to find.

You know i am here
but divulge your secrets you do not
like a heart forgotten by time.

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  • hgfdsamandasdfgh
    April 23
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    Love it
    Short, yet amazing <3


  • Lost In Dreaming
    January 12

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    Aww... Brooksy this is so beautiful but it has a distinct sadness to it too. I love it! ttyl

    ♥ meg