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Under This Apple Tree

Come walk with me my darling
By this apple tree sparling
Singing like the little birds
Making melodies with words
Expressing the beauty
Abounding in love fruity.
~@~
Come and let us express love
Yearning for bliss in white gloves
Under this apple we'll hug
As passion fragrance like drug
Takes its toll on us calling
While we're on our knees crawling.

Author's Comments :
ANACREONTIC IS A FORM OF POETRY MADE POPULAR BY THE CLASSICAL GREEK POET ANACREON. ANACREONTIC POEMS ARE ALL ABOUT LOVE,ROMANCE AND WINING.IT IS OFTEN WRITTEN IN SEVEN SYLLABLES PE

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  • Stardust-luvr
    January 11, 2009

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    well done with such imagery and poetic passion - its good to see you writing again on here with love and many blessings always my dear friend xxxx


  • ennovy silver member
    January 11, 2009

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    Wow a lovely vision under the apple tree, crawling around picking up apples...with some one you adore....excellent love story...in verse...Ma