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[ Take a walk with me my darling ]

Take a walk with me my darling
Hand in hand to the East side park
Whisper words of love into my ears
As we do the ball room dancing
~@~
Take away from your mind weariness
Come and lets dine on heavenly food
Break every tie that breeds fearfulness
Enjoy the fun in parties while glancing
~@~
Take this as a token of my love
Know within you that I really care
As you set your affections above
Pressure emanating from passion.
~@~
In truth we stand to gain attention
Emanating from heaven's fountain.

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  • ennovy silver member
    January 11

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    Absolutely a vivid wonderful poem about love & a couple in love...You created the beauty of courtship perfectly...excellent write... Ma