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Footprints in the sand

I walk down the beach
Stumbling, I look down to see
Footprints in the sand

A contest entry

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  • charlesthebald
    January 16

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    When I first saw it (and I'm being honest) I thought you were writing a poem about the leona lewis song! I was about to roll my eyes, but it was preeety cute. : )


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 11
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    now this

    brought a smile to my face, sweet memories of vacations, thank you for this entry, good luck
    mm