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ensnared

Missing image
arrived light on earth
bereft of baggage,
lord sent me to roam the earth
free as a bird,
living like guest, without coveting.

but trapped in invisible nets
which I am unaware,
led on different paths,
with physical freedom deceptive,
chained by psychological hang overs.

I pick my stars
from among plenty in the sky,
searching dearly for missing one,
days together,
leaving what is in firmament.

I crave to make indelible marks,
but what I leave is footprints
on shores of sand,
washed away by tidal waves of time,
I am nothing, except to myself,
craving to fill my ego.

I understand others,
but myself,
thoughts ensnare.
caught in their network
breathe is conditioned,
heart beat is programmed.

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 11

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    Ooooh I love what you did with the prompt! So in depth. Great imagery and flow as well! Bravo! Great job and good luck

    ♥ Kathraina


  • maralisa silver member
    January 11
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    a wonderful poem dad good luck in the contestmaralisa