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Season's Dance

Summer now over
A gentle breeze,
                      t
                          w
                        i
                    s
                        t
                          e
                      d
                            leaves
Taking hold of fall.

Author notes

just thought i would try to write a haiku for a change (age 17)

A contest entry

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 17
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    Thanks for your entry:

    "
    Summer now over
    A gentle breeze,
    t
    w
    i
    s
    t
    e
    d
    leaves
    Taking hold of fall."


    This is sweet.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • bar room stool
    January 12
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    this was realy great i loved it


  • Doug Cavers
    January 11
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    i like this,
    the "twisted" part
    its chill