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My New Revolution

I awoke today to a brilliant sky
although the snow was falling.
When I feel no dismay and I'm free from a lie
I hear the center calling.
With truth I find my place and I take a new chance
and I see that my heart is yearning.
With youth I find such grace and I start a new dance
and I see that my mind is learning.
There's more to this life than the things that I have lost
thus I find the strength to be outgoing.
With grief and with strife, with an unfortunate cost
I sometimes know that blood will be flowing.

With a love so divine and a conscience so pure
I observe what is waiting for me.
Like a sun I will shine, I stand up to endure
life's big race but I'm running with glee.

With a heart calling out and a posture so steady
I awake driven with such desire.
I know what I'm about and I know that I'm ready
with matches to light my first fire.
The flame rises high and I see where it's going
so long looking for a solution.
My soul starts to fly and confidence is showing
I embrace my new revolution.

Author notes

In life, the tide begins to change. At this point, one could allow the tide to continuously hit them, or float above the oceans waves. Life is a gift; if only people would stop depriving themselves, they could appreciate it.

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  • Antipodi
    April 9

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    Man this revolution is the type we should all join wonderful positive imagery and strong emotions ...flying high excellent write poet

    • I suppose that the best thing to say in response to your comment is this.
      Before we change the world, we must first change ourselves.
      Thanks for reading:
      BC.


  • kaitlyn-love
    March 30

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    This is a very positive poem, new beginings, change all have a starting point that is aknowledged. Nice write, I enjoyed reading this.

  • Really wonderful write here... New love can heal old sores....

    Lil

  • you definitely defined what it's like to hit the ground running and not looking back.
    May you continiously feel so light of feet and spirit.


  • Janice M Pickett
    January 30
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    Excellent way to feel and be. You ahve come a long way and i am very proud of you. Well done.


  • CanadianGirl1
    January 12
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    Great Write BC!


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    January 12

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    You expressed yourself so well in this one, my friend...not as radical as some of your other writes, but a nice, positive approach...hope all is going great in your world...

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