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Salvaging Peace

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Tonight I gave my heart to you

bruised and battered

torn and blue

Set on fire like a silver and gold refinery

I can no longer look behind me

submitting myself wholisitic and new

like the fresh morning dew

I lay safely in your hands

like a dove or a lamb

For my heart awaits you

without hesitation

For you are the Lord

Prince of Peace

salvaging grace

misery released

so that we may grow completely

and not make the same mistakes again

until the next lesson is learned

leaving my heart humble instead

Author notes

There is nothing in this world worth holding on to - our purpose is greater when we are planted next to the Lord.

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  • melphleg gold member
    June 15

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    Beautiful write. What faith and commitment you show in this piece. It is clear Jesus truly owns your heart.

    • Getting There...

      Thank you for commenting on this piece. I wish I could relive all of the emotions that drove me here although some were sad and helpless. I suppose I knew all along where my heart was and there was no compromising.... This has definately been a journey of rediscovering my faith in such a crazed world.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 12

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    Precious Write!

    Precious words draw me in from Gods' word.."set on fire like silver and gold refinery, I can no longer look behind me" " For you are the Lord, Prince of Peace, salvaging grace, misery released"...Your words say it all...that work of grace working in us day by day. You like an other special young woman in my life on ap have the power to touch the heart and soul powerfully with your words...May this continue....You are blessing us with your penning! write


  • stavykm gold member
    February 8

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    Excellent

    Oh life lessons when learned does leave a humbled heart that is for sure. Seems as though I have had to learn so many things the hard way. Still learning too. What an excellent poem Lauren. Just the flow and some rhyme all was perfect. The message is so powerful and so very true. Thank you for sharing with me your gift to write poetry and to share some wisdom with me too. You also have a beautiful heart.

    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love Always,
    Kelle Marie


  • dustookie2
    January 11

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    Life is learning lessons and experiencing what there is as we make our journey. Some lessons we need to learn and pass through alone while others require assistance from others but we are all on this journey called life. Mistakes require forgiveness and tolerance holding faith in belief and when it gets too tough for us to handle give it up and ask for His help....the answer will come to us may not be what we want but what we need. It can be a very humbling experience but one from which we can learn and grow. I feel so much of your heart penned within the lines. Your words flow with ease as you paint images with emotion that settle in thoughts as they linger giving rise for some reflection...life is for living Nicely penned hun

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