i hear them in my head
those voices over and over again
i tell my family
they say im crazy lieing
i have no friends no buddy
once again they think im crazy
my family tries medicen
mostly pills
i go up to my hill think about the things they say
i hear the same things every day
i wake up in the night
go away i scream
every one thinks im crazy
locked my self up in my room
i can still here them
they killed me inside
they ruined my life
i finally fall asleep
i wake up
go away i scream
leave me alone
you ruined me
and my home
my parents would walk in
they say im crazy lieing
you dont hear the terriable thing they say i scream
i wish they go away
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soo what do u think
Comments
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i suggest you read through or have someone else read through this and fix some spelling errors and such but over all great piece
thanks for entering~ -
scary
such an emotional brilliant poem i can feel the catchy poem and i like how you built the stanza well ldone
and good luck in the contest
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Hi Nessie! That's some heavy writing for a young person! The thought and feelings are powerful.
You're like me- spell-check can be a friend- do you know how to use it? It just cleans up all the little things! No matter, thank you very much for your poem! Gresham
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LOVE IT
wow... i like that.. i can almost see it... COOL
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