I'd feed you...
Ha ha ha
I'd feed you, allright.
First course,
A poison soup
Made from a cocktail
of various chemicals,
used for cleaning my toilet.
Second Course,
Chocolate cake
covered with poo frosting,
smeared with your third course,
Creamed rat poison...
Ingest and wait.
Rubbing alcohol to wash it down.
Drink up and die.
I hate you....
Author notes
What would I feed my foe?
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Uhm. The poo part was a little gross. I found this piece kind of base. Keep working on it.
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As always from the guts.... A vivid poem lol.. It is wonderfully brutal.. I loved it.. Great write..
Love and Light AngelofLight
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hmm wow talk about one of the strongest emotions hate caps them all. Man I was eating too while I read this yuck! *gross* lol I love the expression you put in this. makes me want to stay on your good side or at least if I piss you off never come to dinner. lol
A great poem thanks so much for entering this. My favorite part was:
Made from a cocktail
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Wow, interesting. If you ever produce a recipe book, let me know. There are a few people on my X-mas list that I'd love to send a copy to. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
-Løki
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Okay... that's origional. I must remember to never get on your bad side, really, that would not be good. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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lol. Thanks!
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i love it!
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This is awesome. Sounds like something I would write lol.
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WOW
this was pretty powerful.. I hope that I don't ever get on your bad side.
Yvonne
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I sure wouldn't want to be on your list of enemies. LOL Great job using the prompt with such imagination. I hope you felt better after this vent.
Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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It seems like you don't like this person..
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Pretty brutal Mad at someone?
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