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Our Baby

Our Baby
How can you love some thing so much, that you've never seen,
nor never touched.
But you know it's there and you really care.
Then without a sign or even a hint, God takes it and now
it's his.
our little baby boy that we'll
never see is with
God and is watching over me.
Melissa Loftus

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  • Ali - Pie
    January 25

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    Very even flow, I really enjoyed your poem, so beautiful.
    Loved this line:
    "Then without a sign or even a hint, God takes it and now
    it's his.
    "
    ♥

  • imjustme213
    January 10

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    pretty good

    I liked the poem, and the way the concept was portrayed. The sense of loss, was strong, but still love on both sides exist. In the 4th line, you do need to put another L in really.