slowly losing
what control
she once had
This darkness
Takes hold
transforming purity
in to pure Evil. . .
We have lost her
forever
Author notes
Up to 30 lines max
15 poets only
Use the prompt
No profanity
Have Fun!
A contest entry
- ♥QUICKIE♥ !!! by Kathraina.
700 points, ended January 11, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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There's beauty in evil
We all see different things in a picture, and you've once again captured the emotions deep within this picture beautifully. Goes to show one need not write an epic to express what can be reflected in a short poem. Well done and congratulations on your bronze trophy.
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Congratulations on the bronze dude,
"transforming purity
in to pure Evil. . ."
I like that,
All the best
Ken
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Thank you much sir, thank you much!
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OOO
I love it! dark and just beautiful
I think you did great with the prompt.
Keep the ink flowing
Fire
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this is so sad. I hope never is really lost to evil because I believe even evil with the touch of love and light can be reborn
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I adore your style of writing, you have so much talent. Congrats on the bronze.
Take care
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The smaller amount of words captivates the reader and keeps your mind and eyes tuned in. Power full and enchanting. This is why your one of my favs.
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Nice
good luck in the contest. I like it. Keep them coming
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very nice
and congrats on the bronze
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WONDERFUL!!
Wonderful take on the pic! It is so sad people do let this happen to them. 's
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a sad write brother you said it this is me i am losing sight of everything around me and i am losing who everyone loves i am becoming more depressed by the day and i am lost great poem keep writing you are great poet
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Excellent take on the picture. Your words expressed this transformation wonderfully.
Best wishes with this.
Gaylene
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Captures the picture perfectly. Another excellent write.
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Wow, what a terrible reality to face,
Great work and good luck to you with
this one here!
Jeremy0826
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Wow this is a great poem Very nice word choice good luck in the contest best wishes always be well
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Wow, such deep emotion portrayed. Love what you did with this piece. I love how you said "transforming purity
in to pure Evil. . ." since the pic shows a face of black and white. Bravo! Good luck
♥ Kathraina
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