Tainted LOVE

fuel my anger with all of your lies
told me things SO i would stay around.
told me you missed me...
but you i've been sleeping with her.

told me you loved me...
told me ....
YOU CARED.

look at me now..
anger fuels me..
told me ...

you wanted me..
in many ways than one.
but all to place that fake
hole of a heart on your stupid

ass happy face.

no more...
i say..
don't wit your pity
sorry its fake and heartless
alibi
SO this is good bye!

A contest entry

Emotional Wreck by ToxicSuicide. 750 points, ended January 11, 34 entries
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fight back by Haley-baby1. 550 points, ended February 18, 14 entries
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Haley-baby1
February 18

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i like this very much
but i'd go over grammar if i were you.
i'm not a stickler for typos, just when they get confusing. thank you very much for entering, and could you put which ption you chose?
LittleLoverSoPolite
January 12
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fantastic write, great flow, and simply wonderful emotional words. nice job!
missygreendaychimp
January 11
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a really emotionat poem, very well writen!

well done!
Jade.Butterfly
January 10
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Whoa!
Such raw emotion pouring from this piece.
I can really relate, and it's no fun to be cheated on.
I have been down that path several times and it i can see the fury within someone when it happens to 'em.
Great write i liked it very much!
-Mandi
UntilxIxDie
January 10

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wow
this is wonderful .so is this what happened between you and your boyfriend? i got to go ill talk to ya later bye
wanderingpaths
January 10
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AW, THIS IS REALLY GOOD,
AND I LOVE THE SERIES.
ToxicSuicide
January 10
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This is raw with emotion. Great. Thank you for entering, good luck!
~ToxicSuicide.