Trapped within your own mind
And the ideals of others
May your thoughts never be incomplete
May your dreams never be smothered...
[(And maybe one day you'll free your soul)]
Author notes
Completley random contest... but ok, pretty cool.
Exaclty 30 words
A contest entry
- ♥QUICKIE♥ !!! by Kathraina.
700 points, ended January 11, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Read. Review. Enjoy.
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congrats on the trophy.
This is an amazing poem... it sorta reminds me of one of my favorite bands, actually; Valient Thorr. I dunno if you listen to them or not. Most people don't lol. -
I have incomplete thoughts,
incomplete dreams,
I stay inside my head where reality is twisted and made a labrynth of dreams and nightmares to reality,
My soul which is free, is trapped within a cage that lusts for freedom everyday..
^^ loved it hun!
keep up the work!
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wow i really like this. it's so wonderfully captivating in such a small amount of words.
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This is really good Sweetie!
I like it!!!
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Gwen
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Nicely done. I really like what you have done with the prompt. I know it's really random, but I'm a really random person. Great piece, thank you for entering, and best of luck!
♥ Kathraina
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