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Heartbreak Road

I see the dark road in front of me,
the one that I'm being forced to walk down.
I have to be alone,
with only my shadow beside me.

The brutal wind is blowing,
and the deadly rain is falling.
I'm soaking wet,
and freezing cold.

My ivory white arms are wrapping around me,
hugging me almost.
Taking the part of the one,
who used to be my lover and whose now my killer.

I'm being forced to walk down the road,
of heartbreak.
To never return until the sun rises,
which in my eyes never seems to occur.

I have a lock around my neck,
all the way down to the place where my heart used to be.
The lock is open,
because you already stole my heart and shattered it forever.

So now here I am,
walking along in the,
Brutal.
Deadly.
Destruction of my mind.

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  • Violent Glass
    February 4

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    wow this is beautiful
    i loved the last stanza
    i can really relate to this becuz its happen
    to me before and i was stupid enough to let it happen again recently, this is beautiful
    thanx for the entry


  • ToxicSuicide
    January 10

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    Thank you so much for entering my contest! I loved the first stanza.
    "I see the dark road in front of me,
    the one that I'm being forced to walk down.
    I have to be alone,
    with only my shadow beside me." I wish you luck!
    ~ToxicSuicide.