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[ Imagination converts to energy ]

 
 
Imagination converts to energy
where the tires meet the road.
Freedom isn’t a concept;
it breathes, it bleeds, it roves.

My chariot of two hundred horses
four cylinders full of clashing steel
Moving one hundred miles-per-hour,
asleep and “dreaming” at the wheel…

…but still Awake! My eyes are open!
I look to the future, not time that’s passed!
I chose to live in my “mistakes”;
I lost my way and I burned the maps.

Not transcendent. No, I was alone,
totally distinct in my own skin.
But once I saw that my hands weren’t mine
I decided to sail against the wind.

I said, “I’ll run away, I’ll steal my hands!
I’ll emancipate my mind!
I’ll go wherever they dare not,
and I’ll see just what I find!”

At these words, I took the feet I owned
and put the pedal to the floor.
I know that God had a plan for me,
but what if I’m meant for more?

I ate the succulent fruit of rebellion;
but I never took the Serpent’s help.
I climbed the tree, picked out the seeds,
and planted some fruit for myself!
 
 

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3."Live out of your imagination, not your history."
Stephen Covey

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  • Ellis gold member
    August 3
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    I like this

    This reveals excellent thinking and great poetic talent.

  • I love this
    emancipate my mind
    perhaps that is God plan
    you kept my attention through out
    very creative and interesting
    God bless you my friend...

  • kendhal22
    January 11

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    This is goregeous

    I still need the quote that you used for the poem. I was inspired and awe in the poetic attributes written here. Your words are verbally expression of who you are in a loving way. Thank you for coming to my contest. Kendhal22


  • Doug Cavers
    January 11
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    3.Live out of your imagination, not your history.
    Stephen Covey