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Anger

Anger blossoms through me like fire, unquenchable, always thirsty.
Why can’t I have an immovable calm, like others I know?
Or at least those people know how to seem calm.
I do not possess even that small talent.
How dare they condescend me!
How dare they whisper behind my back!
How dare they demean me!
I am a person like them, nothing less
Just because I may think deeper is not a reason to
Condescend me
Patronize me
Insult me
Pity me
Hate me
All for the way I am!

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yeah. i don't even know where this came from...

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  • Symphony
    April 28
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    very angry ... full of frustration it's good to get these feelings out.

    thanks for entering


  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 25
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    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    <3 abi


  • Luciferschild
    January 21

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    a nice introspection write but i think i could have been expressed a bit more clearly, thank you for entering and good luck

  • Very powerful write. I can feel your anger and frustration so clearly.
    But one thing i have to say askng your self why, how, what, continuously will only drive you crazy. Unfortunatly there are no answers to you questions, all i know is that every one is different and you just have to try and adapt your feelings and way of dealing with them as best you can and use them to your advantage. I know this is easier said than done.
    THank you for entering my contest means a lot


  • forbidden-colour
    January 14
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    I hope things work out for you, thank you for entering.


  • ToxicSuicide
    January 11

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    I like how the rythm changes and keeps you on your toes. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • wanderingpaths
    January 10
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    i LIKE THE LINE BREAKS.

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