Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Come Back Please

You said you'd always be there
My shoulder to cry on
My helping hand

Where are you now
Gone, just like the others
I'm sitting here thinking alone

Pain, just another emotion
Scars that are meaningless on my arm
Tears, fallen and forgotten

You could've stayed
I would've been here
To be your helping hand
The stepping stone you needed

Reach out and take my hand
Forget all your pain
Never to late to change your mind

I'll beg, plead, even take a bullet
Just to keep you here
Your not as unwanted as you think

I still need you
Whether you believe or not
There is someone who wants you here
I'm still waiting for you

A contest entry

Tell me what you think, be honest please

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • pumpykin
    January 10
    Edit | Reply
    Wow, this is very emotional...I can really feel the sorrow and longing. I think you did a very good job with the prompt, thank you for entering