I don't know what to do,
I don't know if he likes me too.
I can't figure out what he thinks,
He's skating in my mind in a frozen ice-rink.
We share lots of smiles,
Even a laugh or too,
I just need to know,
What should I do?
He's got me confused,
I don't know what to say,
Whenever I'm around him,
Everything seems okay.
I wish I knew what he thinks,
I wish I could tell him too,
But now my mind is going crazy,
What should I do?
I don't know where we will wind up,
Now or hopefully soon,
But at least for now,
I'll keep staring at the full moon.
Starlight, starbright, the first star I see tonight.
I wish I may, I wish I might, have this one wish, just one I'm begging you.
Star, the one think I'd like to know is,
What should I do?
Author notes
Thanks for reading guys. This is based on real stuff BTW!
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this is realy pretty! We ALL can relate! And I LOVE how you added a favorite bed time rhyme at the end
Very creative!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
<3 Abi -
If he doesn't like you he's not worth your while! You are talented beyond your years! Yes, I could tell it was based on real life - Don't worry - it's all part of the journey. Keep writing!
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I'm not sure if the guy likes me. Thanks for cheering me up though! Thanks for the comment -- really made my day. Thank you so much!
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