You,
My sweet,
My one true love.
Deepest of darks,
Indigo hues.
Eyes so striking
Like lightning
Reflected in a pool
Of crystal waters.
Delectable kisses,
Sweet and innocent.
Play with me...
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- It's Raining Love by Sandygram.
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great imagery. very enjoyable
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wow....i love this..it made me want to be that person, hahaha
this is great, good luck and take care -
A lovely poem. Wonderful imagery. I want to thank you for entering my contest. Your poem was a pleasure to read.Very heartfelt words. I wish you the best of luck. Take care, Sandy
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only if......
If I had blue eyes... this was a beautiful poem to your blue eye bandit.
Yvonne
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