You tell me your fighting demons
But that's as far as you will go
I try to help, offer to listen
All you do is deny me
Make me feel as if I am
Invisible
Not a part of your life
We have children, a life
Together
Yet you act as one
You wont let me in, your walls
are unbreakable, my fist bleeding
from pounding, my eyes wet
from tears, my heart shattering
to pieces
Your demons not only destroy you
they are ripping us apart, our family
Please talk, to me, to some one
Please get help
I beg of you
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Please do not judge, or criticize this. It is a true story that needed to be written to help the pain
In a list
No critizing please
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A wonderful sad but true poem Emily !
beautifully written and heart touching !!
Thank you for sharing it with us ...
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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can't tell you how much i can relate to this.
if only they'd open their mouths long enough to tell us how they're feeling and why.
males hey? 
well done on another fantastic write.
I enjoyed it.
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Hi Emily ! This is a very poignant and
touching poem you have written .
Many readers can relate to this pain you
feel , hope you can find a solution to
work it out - together ...
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Men are selfish...
selfish with pleasure and guilty with pain. There is a door locked from his side. I hope you can persuade him to unlock it. I'm sure this was hard to write.
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this is very good...i'm sorry you have to go through all this pain.
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Well..I must tell the stories of the demons..they are dealt with the patience and tolerence is the key to take a stand against them..yes with a strong and universal smiles on the face may bring the results ..and move ahead with a confidence that your GOD is in your side..things will be changed gradually..and happy days will be back again amen....
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hey emily, i'm so sorry over this, i hope he opens up to you or gets help and it all works out...families shouldn't be ripped apart.
wyatt
xxx
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I feel the same exact way. I'm so sorry.
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Thank you for your comment it is nice someone knows how I feel. Thanks again.
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