When you need someone you can call on me
If you need a shoulder for all your tears
When your precious heart needs a faithful touch
There are tell-tale signs all around
And a tender moment I can help, you'll see
When you love someone, set them free
It's a two-way street when you fall in love
Mixed with rain and tears when you're thinking of
The one who has the key to that special place
Where you keep your feelings from getting out
Your most prized possession is yours alone you see
Because when you love someone, set them free
No one can control another's wayward heart
It's not how love can work if you tear it apart
It's all pretention if you think you can control it all
You can't have it all by giving back less
It's what sets us all apart you see
When you love someone, set them free
When you need someone you can call on me
If you need a shoulder for all your tears
When your precious heart needs a faithful touch
There are tell-tale signs all around
And a tender moment I can help, you'll see
When you love someone, set them free
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Comments
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This poem was very beautiful. I liked the repitition of the last line in each of the stanzas and it flowed nicely. I like it A LOT! Thanks for you entry!
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I really do admire your talent. I wish I could write poetic songs as you do. It's been a while since I've noted you, sorry for that. But I can see that your writing is still wonderful. I hope you are well.
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Third stanza has a spell error 'what'..this does flow very nicely as lyrics and the sentiments are lovely too, not sure if 'salon' should have an 'e'. Thank you so much for this entry
C
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