A deluge of raindrops steadily fall.
too many sad memories too recall.
Pings upon rooftop going drip drip,
layers of hurt, peel away and strip.
Wind in the hollow becomes dank,
dreams wash away from river bank.
Flood of emotions return in spring,
thunder rumbles, birds do not sing.
Hope it is different then other years,
will showers wash away my tears?
When rainbow appears, will it stay,
or like last year, will it fade away?
Flash flood of sad memories ignite,
when spring showers come in sight.
Wash over me sad thoughts of love,
as sorrow rains down from above.
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Superb
Ah, 'tis a very fine write, as usual. Imagery; rhythm, and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. And it does bring back some poignant memories.
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Great Comment
Good Morning and thank you for this wonderful comment. You take care and have a great day. Always, Sandy
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Rain, rain go away come again another day..
Remember those lines from a child's poem? Your poem is warm and so true,The rain says so much and brings back memories also, some happy and some sad. When it rains do not be sad. When it rains think of spring, flowers, and the earth's rebirth. x12
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Such A Lovely Comment
Good Morning Papagallo , This was such a lovely comment to read and uplifted my spirits. Thank you so much. You take care. Smiles to you too. Sandy
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Awesome
Sandy
Rain...wrote about in many ways
Great topic for writing poetry
I love your take on rain, raindrops, showers, thunder storms, etc...
Beautifully sad look at rain and what the future holds
Wonderfully written
Thanks for sharing this great piece
Much love and many blessings
David
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Good Morning David
A wonderful comment from a wonderful friend. Thank you so much. I always enjoy when you drop by. Hugs and Smiles, Many Blessings. Sandy
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The winter rains can't always
stay. For one day soon will come a spring day...mac
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Thank You Mac
Good morning to you on this cold cold day. I hope the sun is at least shining there in Ohio for you. It is not here for a few reasons. Thank you for reading dear friend.I always enoy you stopping by.
Hugs and Smiles,
BlessYou,
Sandy
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Wow.
One of your best ones. The picture painted here was so dramatic & sad. Good one, Auntie Sandy.
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Thank You Dear Nephew
Always a pleasure to hear from you. I hope all is well. there Hugs and smiles.
Always,
Auntie Sandy
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Oh, the anxiety of those floods of bad memories, especially when the dam breaks and they come so hard and fast. Do I ever hear you on this one. I feel for you Sandy, and I would always be glad to try and cheer you up and get you out of that state of mind if you want!
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Good Morning Rovingone
Thank you so much for your caring comment. It means alot to me. You do cheer me when ever you stop by and read and comment. It is always nice to hear from you. Hugs and Smiles, You take care. Bless you, Sandy
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i think this is an awesome write. for years this was me and after more that 11 years im finally happy...something i never experienced before. although, this is true, there are thoughts of is it gonna end and others as well. any way, just wanted to let you know that i thought this was a really awesome poem and relate to a lot.
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Thank you for commenting It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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