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my final fantasy

rikku flys in wearing nothing but her wings.
i look at her and tell her to fly over here
and sit on my flower.
hovers around the way she does.
looking cute like always.
watch my bud bloom,
expand, and shake in the wind.
will she shelter it?
will she let me explore her cave.
ill put bloom stalk and all in it.
as i shove my flower deeply into her cave.
exploring every inch with my bloom.
she moans and screams and tenses up.
as she releases her horde of monsters i lick them up.
then she gently sits posing on my flower.

Author notes

9. Fairy flower
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/ClubsetsAngelwings/Fantasy/boris_vallejo_95floweringnest.jpg
kinda twisted it my own way though

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  • Night Rose
    October 27

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    Daughter Of Night

    Wow I really like this alot very nice choice of words to write this poem very romantic in making love and its written like a respectful way very good

    your friend,
    angel


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    September 1

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    that was what you call beautifuly erotic,
    i envy a poet with such words
    so sexy grrrrr


  • Lilith-Eve
    August 30
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    wow, that was freaking amazing nice choice of words


  • Dark Otter
    January 11

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    As a master of the dark and twisted,

    I appreciate someone who can go over the edge with an idea. We all see something different in these pictures. Your erotic take has a little of my demented humor in it. A floral fantasy comes to life in a orgasm of fertility. Thank you for your entry!