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Anger

Heaps of smoldering coals
The essence of hells fury
Molten lava in our souls
Minds filled with absurdity

Boiling and bubbling
Under the flesh
Piping hot and steaming
A firey dragon's breath

Feverish rage filled mind
Sweating in humidity
Flames no longer bind
A savage burning body












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  • Flowergirl
    January 17
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    very nice job i love brilliant work so keep it up and nice job...


  • iamfromabove
    January 12

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    I had two thoughts in mind... the first was pain & wishing for death & the other was rage...... I felt both.
    You have written this really well. Great work
    Mia


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    January 10

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    enjoyed the imagery you brought forward with this write. Hell of alot of emotions flowing too.
    Juls