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Gaze Upon, Lost

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I gaze at the grey world around me
wondering if there is more;
I'm at a loss,
completely.

Life used to be like a rainbow,
many arrays of color
in an everlasting dance
        and intertwining.

But as I grow and life gets complicated
I really wonder if there's any color
and not just the grey that I gaze upon
                                                    now.

Though I think I see things in the distance
I cannot be sure.
Is it just a play on my eyes,
like the colors I no longer see?

Who can really say I suppose.
Maybe I'll never
find the real answer and continue
                      to gaze on, still lost.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 25

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    I love it
    I really feel as though all the colour is fading from the world and some days I'm not quite sure if it will come back

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck

    Shari


  • serenity silvermoon
    January 13

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    its good but it doesn't sound like a poem but i got the point there are other colors out there but alot of us cant see them all i see is black in my world


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 10

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    excellent~

    Excellent sweetie
    I think you have followed the prompt well
    Some people look at life through rose colored glasses
    Then there are those that see life in grey..........
    I think of grey as dark and dreary....the unknown......
    Best of luck in the contest....
    Excellent imagery and flow.......
    Hugs
    Susan~~~~


  • Denerica
    January 10

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    Bravo

    I feel this way, and I like anayzing and studying things and all creation, so the grey/color comparision is clever. Blessings.


  • eizen-wolf
    January 10

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    thats make it the two of us now ,
    so if u find out where the colours have gone leaving only the grey behind tell me .
    beside that its a great piece of art .
    good luck from ur biggest fan


    • Kathraina silver member
      January 10
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      The color is hidden from our eyes when our souls are not opened up ^.^
      We cannot trully appreciate such beautiful things without appreciating it's Maker, God.

      ♥ Kathraina

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