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Lost In Your Arms!!

Enchanted melodies swirled
Round fires of passion,
Sprinkling sugar-coated kisses
On glamorous sparks.
[Stirring the stillness of the night]


Luscious embraces enamored
Tenderness with silken whispers
Sung by thirsty lips,
Chapped by the mildness of the breeze.

Magical butterflies filled empty veins
With sweet temptations,
Cascading down scarlet streams.

Piercing smiles of contentment,
Blazed endless rings of fire
With scrumptious longings,
As soft voices echoing in the void,
Lost their way through the light.

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  • stavykm gold member
    April 6
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    Excellent

    Wow this is just beautiful. Oh wow this poem is just perfect , it flowed so romantically dreamy. I love poems that are filled with romance and are so visual such as this one written with great taste. I wish I could write like this. Thank you for sharing your gift with me.

    Wising you many blessings,
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • trekkergirl
    April 1

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    Such a romantic write that you have here.  Full of imagery and emotions.  It flows well and keeps ones attention. Good write.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 18

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    really nice piece of poetry, flows with ease, romantic for your special one, thank you for this entry, good luck
    mm