I beg thee, lord,
Please spare this soul…
Please heal her heart
And make her whole…
Please take her pain,
To live anew…
Her soul is good,
Her heart is true…
I don’t ask much,
We rarely speak…
Just when I’m down,
Or feeling weak…
Now I ask you,
For my friend…
Please intervene,
And help her mend…
Give her strength,
And give her hope…
Your touch divine,
Will help her cope…
Your light will ease,
Her darkest fears…
Please give her love,
And end her tears…
Please help her through,
Her darkest hour…
Feel the love and
Feel the power…
Faith may flutter,
Never quits,
Thanks for listening,
Your pal, Fritz……..
Amen…
Author notes
Hope it helps, my thoughts are with you Aboomer...
In a list
A contest entry
- Prayers for a Miracle with islekine and Starz of Heaven by aboomer.
700 points, ended January 24, 29 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful~
Aaaaaaaw Love the words You brought forth to help heal Jan and Wonderfully worded~
Flawless rhyme but more importantly the message brought forth to touch her deep
The line: Faith may flutter,
Never quits~ grabs hard
Excellent~
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I am deeply touched by your words. Mere words on my part can’t begin to tell you how much this means to me.
best wishes and blessings to you - always.
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Hey Boomer,
Thank you so much for both your kind words & the Gold shiny...
I'm glad my prayer was able to bring hope & solace to you at this time, I meant every word...
My thoughts remain with you, always...
Take care,
Fritz.............
X
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a beautiful prayer and thoughts flow within the beauty of words
Best wishes Julie x
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Wow, such a beautiful prayer. You have really said it all here, I know she has been in my prayers a lot recently. Superb piece.
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Aloha Fritz!
This is so lovely...and heartfelt...
I know she will be pleased with this....
I especially love your humbling last lines!
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on!
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I loved this so much...thank you for sharing this.
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What a heartfelt piece. Great job!
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A beautiful prayer
for a most beautiful soul---
She is just so lovely!
Good luck
and thank you for sharing.
~Pastel
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What a beautiful write.
After seeing the contest it is for, it makes it all the more touching.
You have penned a wonderful verse here, which I hope will offer comfort and reassurance to the one it is written for.
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wow
that almost could be for me!! or not
hugs
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Great
What a poetic prayer for a friend, you must love her or like her a lot my friend to pen her a prayer.
I hope God touches and heals and comforts your friend and she sees that she is loved by God and you to write her such a poem.
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