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Lost

The reflection of my soul is what I see
A shattered piece of reality staring back at me

Fragments of myself lay all arround
Piece by piece I'm torn to the ground

Blinded by the world I'm lost inside
Nowhere to turn and no place to hide

I've lost everything I once held dear
Imprisoned in a world that's engulfed by fear

Does anyone know what it's all about
Where do I turn, there's no way out

Now my only life is one great big lie
Trapped within myself I just want to die

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  • blondone
    March 1
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    oh this is good love the flow every line rings truth right back at me thank you for entering


  • BrokenSanity
    January 12

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    Agreed with below, I feel the same. I love it when other poets write my mind, it makes me feel less.... lost. Well done, poet, I love your style, btw.


  • soulsearchfor1
    January 10
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    Loved it my favorite line was the very last one its a feeling Im quit familiar with


  • ToxicSuicide
    January 10

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    Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck! Btw, my favorite part was,
    "I've lost everything I once held dear
    Imprisoned in a world that's engulfed by fear"
    ~ToxicSuicide.


  • StoneGypsy
    January 10
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    *sigh* this is sad. very sad don't want to die, its bad for you.

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