The reflection of my soul is what I see
A shattered piece of reality staring back at me
Fragments of myself lay all arround
Piece by piece I'm torn to the ground
Blinded by the world I'm lost inside
Nowhere to turn and no place to hide
I've lost everything I once held dear
Imprisoned in a world that's engulfed by fear
Does anyone know what it's all about
Where do I turn, there's no way out
Now my only life is one great big lie
Trapped within myself I just want to die
Author notes
Sad
A contest entry
- Emotional Wreck by ToxicSuicide.
750 points, ended January 11, 34 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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oh this is good love the flow every line rings truth right back at me thank you for entering


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Agreed with below, I feel the same. I love it when other poets write my mind, it makes me feel less.... lost.
Well done, poet, I love your style, btw.


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Loved it my favorite line was the very last one its a feeling Im quit familiar with

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Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck! Btw, my favorite part was,
"I've lost everything I once held dear
Imprisoned in a world that's engulfed by fear"
~ToxicSuicide.
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*sigh* this is sad. very sad don't want to die, its bad for you.
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