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Treasured Gifts Released

Observe the eagle that roams
freely upon the earth

for it lives for today
with no thoughts of tomorrow

mounting the loftiest mountain
or dipping beneath the lowest valley

as it savors the many delights
of an awesome existence

brief as it maybe

until it is no more

We're all partakers of life's goodness,
remembering that it is a privilege

like the many wonderful people
that pass our way

be it nurturing parents or passionate lovers,
incredible children that fulfill our lives

friends of indelible memory who keeps
us enchanted in the mundane of loneliness

we're travellers of fortune
on a quest for that ever elusive wholeness

in search of answers that are only
ascertained inside each of us

always forging into obscurity
as blind men sifting through the dark

when the true road to happiness is
in the exchange of affection

on this marvelous journey of love

because we own nothing
tho we've been given everything

only as a loan on borrowed time
so we can truly know what it is to have lived



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  • princessleejwctlvr2
    January 11, 2009

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    I love it!!!! This is beautifully portrayed you did an incredible job!!!!! Your words flow so lovely!!! Ur imagery is so vivid!!! I love it!!


  • Cannonsfire
    January 10, 2009

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    A beautiful message piece you have here, one thing is 'tho' and the correct way would be 'though'. I enjoyed the thoughts in this, thank you for your entry. C


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 10, 2009
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    I like this piece here you did a great job onthis! Good luck in the contest hon

    always forging into obscurity
    as blind men sifting through the dark

    when the true road to happiness is
    in the exchange of affection

    on this marvelous journey of love