the same sun
that is cursed in the summers
gives relief
in the cold
the saint and the sinner
are the same person
Please tell me what you think
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The idea is powerful, but the wording hasn't come out as strong.
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profound
contradictions within the self...spot on imagery.
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ya i know.........i was on my way to a park.........had to go there to sketch.....and the first four lines came into my head out of nowhere.....the last 2 lines were there in my head for a long time...........thnx for the appreciation
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good thought
we all hold those two elements inside of us.
simple but informative.
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thnx
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good thought.
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good thought.
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how true!
True for all of us...perhaps we're all the same one person on some level...
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thanx
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