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After the destruction

I'm starting to remember
When hardships were
Just part of life
And not the hell
Left after the destruction
Put down your arms
And put up your hands
Cause tomorrow is gonna
Be your last

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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    January 10
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    "When hardships where"
    this shld be were^

    *destruction

    verrrgood as usual