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My Sunlit Path

Morning dew like better diamonds
glistening along the grassy path
where from the sun the road begins.
Morning dew like better diamonds,
shines glowing light on flower's grins
and cleans my soul a golden bath.
Morning dew like better diamonds
glistening along the grassy path.

Glistening along the grassy path
and sweetened by the fairies dance
the path to peace the aftermath.
Glistening along the grassy path:
immortal stars, a liquid bath.
I watch the floral leaves romance,
glistening along the grassy path
and sweetened by the fairies dance.

And sweetened by the fairies dance
the ocean tide takes me away
to where small few can get a glance
and sweetened by the fairies dance.
While in this tranquil lovely trance
towards me the beach-side flowers sway.
And sweetened by the fairies dance
the ocean tide takes me away.

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  • Symphony
    April 14

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    Beautiful .. Magical .. so calm and serene ...

    I wasn't immensely fond of the repeated 'sweetend by fairy dance' BUT this is just a personal opinion and obviously hte line is central to the poem - i did enjoy reading it!

    thanks for entering.


  • Lost In Dreaming
    January 10
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    This a georgous poem. I love the tranquility of it. Great write.

    ♥ meg


  • Tqop
    January 10

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    I love nature. Very beautiful and inspiring. Awesome.
    I wish I could give you a thousand thumbs up.