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Ravenous

popsicle toes edge
starved hounds forgot fishing pole
wolves lost, where?, who knows?


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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 16

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    LOL! Wonderfully done...a nicely written haiku with humor...I bet they remember the pole the next time...
    Best to you!
    mystic


  • Nom de Plume
    January 15

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    s , fishing ? lol, excellent haiku, had me for sure ... wish you luck in your contest
    Cheers


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 10

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    yep

    that would be a ravenous pack of wolves, thank you for this lovely entry...good luck in this contest
    mm