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Missing You

Threw out believeable
Yesterday.
I delayed a stutter
That was slowly
Calming me,
Coaxing me.
You're my daydream
Does it make you
Homesick for me?

I'm still missing you.

I'm still missing you.
Wel i guess that i have
I guess that I have never really had you

You're my daydream
Does it make you
Homesick for me?
Well I'm still missing you
I'm missing you
Do you miss me now?

I rise up, wise up, say it loud,
"Soul, I will not lie to you"
Rise up, wise up, say it loud,
"Soul, I will not lie to you.
I'm all alone."

And I'm still missing you.

Yeah, I'm missing you.
Well, I'm missing you,
Do you miss me now?

And I rise up, wise up, say it loud,
"Soul, I will not lie to you."
Rise up, wise up, say it loud,
"Soul, I will not lie to you."

I will not,
Cause I am all alone.
I will not.

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  • Spunky Splinter
    January 10, 2009
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    First comment and proud! Nice/emotional piece Gabi. I really like the middle part:I rise up, wise up, say it loud,
    "Soul, I will not lie to you"
    Rise up, wise up, say it loud,
    "Soul, I will not lie to you.
    I'm all alone."
    well at least she is back!
    Love, Syd


    • With Broken Wings
      January 10, 2009
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      Haha! Why, thank you dear Sydney.
      Yes, she's back! I missed her a lot <3
      Hence the title of the poem!
      But, OH!
      I can't wait for you to meet her =D

      • Spunky Splinter
        January 10, 2009
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        Yea, I really wanna meet her! (Natalia will bring the pot, you bring the girl)


        • With Broken Wings
          January 10, 2009

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          Yea, she really wants to meet you too!!
          Ok not really, she has no clue who the hell you are...
          ... *awkward pause* ...
          But the gesture was nice! =D


          • Spunky Splinter
            January 10, 2009
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            She will want to meet me once she does (Wait, doesn't make sense) go watch Scarlet Johansson sleep with the king of England! (neither does that)

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