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hurting myself

shying away,

conscious of hurting others.
stepping into other's shoe
thinking like them.

I manipulate myself
at times angry with myself.
this is my nature
doesn't leave me as my shadow.

bending as waves
with touch of wind
I go forward,
then retreat,
not as myself
but responding to outside.

I bear the pain,
of hurting myself,
rather than others,
that sits as residue
in my conscience,
pricks me through the life's journey.

sentiment weaves
my understanding,
keeping senses awake,
guarding as thorns
leaving inside of me
as soft rose.

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prompt: Sentimental



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  • Polaja Greeters member
    January 10

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    This is an interesting take on the prompt - very personal and full of emotion; this had a good flow and a steady rhythm thank you for entering!



    Polly

  • What you have written is a lot like me

  • maralisa silver member
    January 10
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    aw a delightful take on the promt dad good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • BettyB
    January 10
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    I can relate to this awesome writing. Hope you win the contest.