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I Bow To You

By your side Father I walk

good intentions fill my heart,

I will doubt not a moment

for in that moment we will part.

 

 

I cry to you in silent prayer

heal what it is you love,

wrap your light around your child

reveal your sacred dove.

 

 

Release the bond of human pain

replace it with your grace,

let her know how much she's loved

let her feel your warm embrace.

 

 

Bless her Father

Thanks be to God

 

 

 

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    April 5

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    Precious!

    What a lovely prayer poem you've penned here poetess! This type of prayer we need to pray for ourselves & one another daily. So happy you won HM for this. It's worthy!


  • Tqop
    February 4

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    Excellent.

    Nicely done.

    My favorite of all the lines was this one:
    I cry to you in silent prayer

    I can imagine a lot of people doing the same.

    Well done.


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    January 30
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    Excellent

    lovely expression of poetry all the work seen to flow together. i like the images it produce there was lots of passion here and lot of food for thought. plus a good message .great work.There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one.
    I second this emotion ,great work Pisces . QQ


  • aboomer silver member
    January 24

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    I am deeply touched by your words. Mere words on my part can’t begin to tell you how much this means to me.
    best wishes and blessings to you - always.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 15

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    "...I will doubt not a moment..."

    Kathy,
    so reflective of you,
    your determined belief
    and your good wishes for others.

    M-C


  • gladyspshaw57
    January 10

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    Amen!!!!!!!

    Surely this comes from a sincere heart. Our Father does hear, and answer prayers. This pray cannot be amiss. We should always be intercessors for our love ones, and even those we don't know, for the love of God spreads to all of his children. We love without dissimulation, and it shows in our prayers, as well as our everyday life in the presence of others. Our hearts are heavy for those in need of help. We need the help of God to be able to know what we might be able to do for others. This is truly touching. Thank God for his Spirit working in you. Amen?


  • wolfwatcher
    January 10

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    That is an awesome prayer and write!!! The love God has for her is amazing, no doubt! One thing that I love to think about when praying for someone, is that God loves them even more than we do!!! How cool is that?!?!

  • drifting cloud silver member
    January 10
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    Nicely Done


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    January 10

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    Lovely!
    This is my favorite part:
    Release the bond of human pain
    replace it with your grace,
    let her know how much she's loved
    let her feel your warm embrace.

    Very precious words! Pam




  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    January 10
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    "By your side Father I walk
    good intentions fill my heart,
    I will doubt not a moment
    for in that moment we will part."

    This is a very moving prayer, coming from your faith, from knowing of your place within the One, and the Source of your intent that reaches to those you love. Well done poet!

    Be ever blessed and bright,

    Rahad


  • Tqop
    January 10
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    Beautiful. Write on!


  • Hikari Lady
    January 10
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    So very beautiful and touching, the last line in which you ended it just made me sigh and feel dreamy with grace and love. Your beautiful words are always a joy to read.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 10
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    so beautiful

    so touching, great pen as usual lil sis! you are so hugely talented and i'm so thankful for it!


  • Denerica
    January 10
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    Amen

    Definate prayer of asking for a touch, a fill, your glory. Well done. Blessings dear friend.


  • princehusayn
    January 10
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    very prayerful prayer

    this invocation can and will help many what with todays genocide as always man killing man because we all need to heal and prayers and meditation affirmations are so necessary all the time perhaps we will be on an evolved journey to humanity just by taking the time to reflect. Thanyou for sharing.wonderful thoughtful wite...


  • Providence
    January 10

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    What a sacred and holy place you have created. I have stood in this place several times...with my grandmother, an aunt and my own father. It is a place of such intense emotions that come together to create serenity.

    Wonderful work!

    Marianne


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 10
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    DEEPLY TOUCHING!!!

    Your touching and beautiful words will be a light in his darkness! 's

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