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When Love Is New

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Yeaterday's notes

whisper
away,


already,

sweet music,
conceiving in play;


I wonder if she knows,
our song-breath,  begun,

fermenting shadows
to rise

with the sun.






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  • teen poeticsoul
    January 13

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    Tho thumbs up

    It's poems like this that reassure why ur one of my favorite poets on her ) It's very simple and sweet and it makes you smile when you think about all the little crushes and secret loves we all have. it's just plain awesome as usual.


  • tara wilson gold member
    January 10
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    lovely, Mr. Mountain


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 10
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    very interesting

    question, it leaves on to think and assume she does know, thank you for this entry,
    good luck
    mm