Life on hold ,
BACKWARDS SLIDE.
Love never shown,
humanity dies.
Author notes
Sadness is a choice so why would you hold it so tight as to never let anyone in with love
A contest entry
- Humor, and or Nature Haiku by misticmoonlite.
665 points, ended January 14, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is life as we know it in the world today, with all the goings-on!!
lovely job on this one.
love you,
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this is amazing, mama! maybe my favorite from you yet!!
great job
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How true! This is great! I love it! You did great on this one! Now if only everyone would see this and realize the wisdom in your words!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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oh, this is gorgeous...I really love this short piece. "Backwards slide. Love never shown, humanity dies" the flow and the words to this piece is amazing
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a wonderful poem patty good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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This is pretty good... saying so much with so few words! Keep up your amazing work, good luck!
CrimsonViper -
oh yes
this is something we strive not to do, but life takes hold and we go on rebound,thank you for this entry
good luck
mm
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Nice done.. human nature being what it is, it's amazing we survive at all... Well done...
Ken
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