The day I saw you my heart skipped a beat,
and I couldn't say a word nor move my feet.
You honey took my breath away ,
two weeks later we were married hey hey .
You will always be my sweet pa-toot ,
I so love all that you do.
Big blue eyes and blond hair,
ooh la-la mama was so aware.
Now years have passed
and our forms has changed,
Weight has been shifted
parts rearranged .
But honey I still hold my vision true.
for you today and forever
have always been my muse.
So hear is my 368th wish
may it come true,
if you will be my valentine
one more year with you.
I will keep love alive
and baby you must know,
this love is forever
together lets help it grow.
Author notes
Lots of love hugs and kisses for my sweet patoot
A contest entry
- Valentines day by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended January 26, 37 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww this is a wonderful write
I just love this one for the simple reason is that it is a growing love... and wishes to continue to grow but only with the two of you. So romantic. So loving. Excellently written. I just love it. Thanks for entering this one into my contest and especially thats for sharing this with us. I too hope that you get to spend another valentines day together with the one you love.
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awww moma this is excellent!!!! I am sure that ur hubby loves this piece!!!! This is truly romantic and sentimental!!!! You did an absolutely fantastic job writing and portraying this piece!!!! Its so sweet!!!! May God forever bless you both and grant you more years together!!! This truly touched my heart and I know that it came straight from yours!!!!! This is precious!!!!! I love u!!!!
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aw patty a wonderful poem good luckinthe contestmaralisa
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This is great! I love it! I love how it shows how strong your love is! I wish you and your love, only the best this year and many more!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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THIS IS SO SWEET AND DEAR!!!
One can see in your words that love still is strong in your heart.'s
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