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Thinking Mind

Thinking mind doesn’t know
It assumes false premises
And deducts

Awareness just observes
Doesn’t make up stories
Doesn’t judge

Author notes

Inspired by listening to Eckhart Tolle.

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  • Yes!

    This is brilliantly done dear. Written like the Proverbs.
    I love the flow, word choice & rhyme.


  • ApollosMuse
    January 19
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    very thought provoking!!i will probably ponder on this for awhile...read it several times!!


  • Janice M Pickett
    January 14

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    However it is that thinking mind that determines our fate. I like your depth of thought.

  • cacaosister
    January 14
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    i think that too

    I'm going to google this eckhart tolle.
    thanks


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    January 10

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    Behind the mind is the Divine

    our true nature our birth right

    when we stop perceiving with our thoughts the truth illuminates

    beautifully done my friend

    God bless you...

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