To go back to the place of my dreams,
To the place of childhood's imagination,
Back to the Nile of Blue--
Is my latest sensation.
A place of freedom,
Of happiness,
of a childhood I never had.
Oh, how I wish...
And dream...
That this Nile of Blue wasn't my tears.
A contest entry
- Hues of Blue in 12 Lines or Less (there's a catch) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 27, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Ah, how we often wish to go back and yet we cannot. I think in reality we should be thankful often back is not the way
A good job you've done here.
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